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大家可在这评我的稿子

大家可在这评我的稿子

大家可在这评我的稿子,在猪八戒投了半年稿无一收获,希望能在这理得到大家的评论,也算是一种收获了.谢谢大家多多指证.

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垃圾作品

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[:Vg04]

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?:(

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努力朋友
永远不会忘记那个自己喜欢的 一位朋友写的:空俯家酒,想家的感觉.... 人们只记得:----空俯家酒--叫人想家--- 没有人说你是垃圾,也没有人再骂你,但是再也没有人记得你曾经写过些什么..... 只要有你喜欢,就足够了。

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中标与否,别在意太多,只要自己觉得有进步就行

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谢谢!吴为文这么人兄说的对

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第一楼的"人"我当他放屁,不敬重别人,他等于不敬重自己,所以他的为人打一""号

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看样子象个马甲 :(
They call me The Wild Rose But my name was Elisa Day Why they call me it I do not know For my name was Elisa Day On the last day I took her where the wild roses grow As I kissed her goodbye, I said, All beauty must die

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别生气了  乖~~~ :)
They call me The Wild Rose But my name was Elisa Day Why they call me it I do not know For my name was Elisa Day On the last day I took her where the wild roses grow As I kissed her goodbye, I said, All beauty must die

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